Reply With QuoteQuite good. Is this the start of a story or something you want others to continue?
Grayskull was colder and more dank than ever. The Sorceress watched as Adam turned from his sword endowed alter ego and back, never achieving the calm necessary to focus on the portal pool. Adam lost his patience for what seemed like the hundredth time. He looked to the Sorceress. "You must have calm, you must look the creatures of the doorway in their eyes and not succumb to the desire to hate them, think them ugly. You must have the judgment to look deeper, test their resolve..."
Adam grimaced "I can't... all these horrors in my future, all these mutants, demons, giants... treachery... why don't we just launch an Eternium missile into the doorway and have done with it!?"
Sorceress lowered her eyes, then looked with a stabbing glow at Adam "That's Miro talking! You must knife out that taint within you. You must let go your quick judgment and have empathy... "
She waved her hand at what had been another dank, brick wall of a corridor. Suddenly the bricks distorted and became a bas relief of a dragon symbol that soon faded. Adam stared. "take this!" the Sorceress tossed a bindle of bread, blankets and water to Adam. "Take this and travel from here. I will take the form of Zoar and lead you to the dark temple of Ninjor. There he is bound to me by a blood oath to stave off his evil ways and train you in meditation and the true ways of the sword. He is the demon whose son Jitsu is in thrall to Skeletor... but I hold a segment of his dragon symbol here."
Adam, confused, bowed and lifted the bindle, slung it on his back and continued out of the castle.
"This is a rather shameless promotion"
"Worked on me!"
"Me too!"
Quite good. Is this the start of a story or something you want others to continue?
Truth is that I just had finished the Ra's Al Ghul bit in Batman Arkham City and it is the beginning of a story treatment of how Ninjor could be the Ra's in the HeMan universe, maybe training and then turning on Adam.
"This is a rather shameless promotion"
"Worked on me!"
"Me too!"
Ninjor was the worst character in the history of He-Man.
..including that disgusing one-eyed slug Skeletor sumuned.
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