I figured I'd place the griffins' arrival back in Preternia when Anwat Gar boasted a spaceport. As for the repeated sentence, I'll need to fix that-chalk it up to lots of copying and pasting.
I've updated the Narrative with all SDCC Bio reveals. This thing keeps getting better!
At some point, I may try to take it all and actually write it into a better story form, rather than the Cut&Paste Monster that it's become. I guess when I first started this labor of love, I didn;t think it would become such an unwieldy beast. Still, I think that at its core, the Bio-Canon is actually a great take on the MOTU lore. It's certianly my favorite canonical take on the property.
If you haven't Subbed Up yet for 2013, do so please! I simply have to know how all this turns out, and the promise of the Dare, Son of He-Man era being introduced with King He-Man has my apetite whetted that much more!