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    MOTU Fan Comic: "Torn"

    First off, it's incomplete. But, I will be adding new frames during the weekdays, so check back often to see anything new. I will also update this thread once in a while to update progress. Let me know what you think so far.

    Note: All frames may take some time to load, depending on your download speed. If you see any yellow frogalicious "no photo" images, refresh your browser window.

    Note 2: To help alleviate load times, I will be breaking the comic up into parts. This way, you will not have to load an abundance of images that you have already viewed.

    Note 3: If the slideshow opens in a small window, you may need to refresh your browser after expanding the window in order for it to affect the slideshow resolution.

    Torn PT.1 : In Slideshow Form
    Torn PT.2 : In Slideshow Form
    Torn PT.3 : In Slideshow Form

    Thanks!
    Last edited by Ghost of Vapor; September 7, 2011 at 03:24pm.
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    This is REALLY REALLY cool! Its a very interesting way to do a comic, and I think a lot of people could take this route and it would not look good at all, but you've really managed to do an amazing job with it stylistically! Hope to see more!! :-)

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    amazing job!
    well done pale!
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    Thanks Patreek and Kal! I appreciate your comments. It starts off slow, so bear with me. The story will eventually become far more grand than just Adam having life problems, I promise!
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    Brilliant work!

    Wow, I love what you've done with this.

    I tumbled my fave image here: http://t.co/rSvbTl3

    I may post a few others if you like, is there a different url that you'd like me to refer back to, your own site or a project page for example?

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    Quote Originally Posted by horatio View Post
    Wow, I love what you've done with this.

    I tumbled my fave image here: http://t.co/rSvbTl3

    I may post a few others if you like, is there a different url that you'd like me to refer back to, your own site or a project page for example?

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    I'm glad you liked that one. You can simply refer the image to the slideshow URL if you so choose. Thanks horatio!
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    frickin awesome!

    I told you i'd follow this. Great writing skill by the way.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pyre View Post
    frickin awesome!

    I told you i'd follow this. Great writing skill by the way.
    Thanks Pyre! I'm very grateful for the comment.

    UPDATE: I've added a new frame.

    I will be working our company's fair booth for the majority of next week, but will try to add some more frames to the slideshow during the days I am not there.
    Last edited by Ghost of Vapor; August 12, 2011 at 03:27pm.
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    HAHA! the ghost of vapor has done it again! I like the style, not sure I agree with Adam's behavior but let's see how it all turns out. Great work my friend! keep it up!

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    Good stuff Gov! This neat new style fits your natural gift of story telling quite well. I'll be sure to keep checking back for update. Keep up the good work!

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    I like the visual storytelling style...

    ...but the story? Sorry, I'm with Battlecat on this one. Enough whiny superheroes. Smallville nearly killed me with all that garbage about "destiny".

    Have some FUN with this! Tell a fun battle story, or a love story, or a comedy

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    Quote Originally Posted by DisneyBoy View Post
    I like the visual storytelling style...

    ...but the story? Sorry, I'm with Battlecat on this one. Enough whiny superheroes. Smallville nearly killed me with all that garbage about "destiny".

    Have some FUN with this! Tell a fun battle story, or a love story, or a comedy
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    Daaauuuuumm!!! Great Job. Love the style and the writing.Thanks for sharing.
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    This is truly outstanding! I agree with Duncan and Cat, Adam is being a little b**ch, but your writing is crisp and fun and I'm so intrigued. I will be following this closely; looking forward to lots more!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by PIMPS ADAM View Post
    Daaauuuuumm!!! Great Job. Love the style and the writing.Thanks for sharing.
    Quote Originally Posted by sephron13 View Post
    This is truly outstanding! I agree with Duncan and Cat, Adam is being a little b**ch, but your writing is crisp and fun and I'm so intrigued. I will be following this closely; looking forward to lots more!!
    Thank you both for the kind words. I hope you enjoy all that is to come.
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    Cool.

    I enjoyed it.
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    A couple new frames went in today.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ghost of Vapor View Post
    First off, it's incomplete. But, I will be adding new frames during the weekdays, so check back often to see anything new. I will also update this thread once in a while to update progress. Let me know what you think so far.

    Torn: In Slideshow Form

    Thanks!
    Absolutely fantastic! Really wonderful! If I wrote a script would you want to illustrate it?
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    Quote Originally Posted by MldMnrdReporter View Post
    Absolutely fantastic! Really wonderful! If I wrote a script would you want to illustrate it?
    Thank you kindly for the remarks!

    As to your question, I suppose once I've finished this, and if it were a story that really seemed interesting, I might be able to. If you have one, I'd like to read it.
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    UPDATE: Added 3 new frames today.
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    Loving it so far!
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    Really loving this!

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    Still excellent! Love the shots with Randor and Battlecat giving He-Man his sword.
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    Very nice work. Can't wait to see more.

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    Very nicely done, do more!! This was a great story so far. The slide presentation is a really good way to tell the story as well.
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