MOTUC Mini-Comic: Teela's Destiny

[JonWes]

All right everyone! It's here!

The completed comic. Thanks so much everyone for their kind words throughout the process. I really appreciate and hope you like the finished work! I've taken down all the various images for now. I corrected a lot of images and I also changed the font. So you'll want to read it from the beginning. I will put images back up shortly for those that would rather read it that way than through the issuu viewer. For now, you can read it on Issuu.com by clicking the cover:



Images are back up in this thread: http://www.he-man.org/forums/boards/...9&postcount=85
And this thread: http://www.he-man.org/forums/boards/...0&postcount=86

[theblock]

That looks really good so far, more in tune with the storybook format of the Alcala books in the 1st wave. Hope there's a more logical explanation to her becoming blonde. Great job

[AdultCollector]

That is looking really good! Very professional. Do the whole thing and I'll make a miniature version of it

[JafariStew]

Looking forward to this as I have thought of doing something similar myself, I am very excited to the story & illustrations!!

[Granamir]

Congratulations! i want see other pages!

[Niki]

Now that´s what i call a perfect teaser and it´s a great picture.

I love the Windraider, even the sticker is there and looks cool.

[Veebs]

I LOVE this, it looks really great and it is funny that while I hate the concept of the Sorceress dying, you make me want to see more of it! One little thing if you finalizing things, you are missing "one" from the last sentence:

…Teela had not understood why the Sorceress insisted that she be the [ONE] to take her to the Citadel of the Elders…

[JonWes]

Thanks all for the great feedback! Glad you guys are liking it so far. With the knowledge that the three mini-comics next year are probably all we're getting in the forseeable future, I really wanted to do something like this.

I've thought about it (and started) in the past but I keep running into walls because a full comic book would be too much of a time commitment. Also, when I first tried it there wasn't a lot of info out there about how different stories fit together, and I REALLY want these to accurately reflect the MOTUC story line. Just because I think that's a fun challenge.

But I feel like we know enough about this to make some assumptions and add a few bits of my own here and there.

Right now the script is at 13 pages, but now that I have the format sort of figured out I'm hoping I can get that down to 12. And THEN, if people still like it I'm planning to do one for Battleground Evil-Lynn that would sort of pick up where this one left off.

That is looking really good! Very professional. Do the whole thing and I'll make a miniature version of it

Cool! That's what I'm going for. I plan to put it up on issuu.com for easy reading online and also hope to post a hi-res PDF version so people can print it out.

I LOVE this, it looks really great and it is funny that while I hate the concept of the Sorceress dying, you make me want to see more of it! One little thing if you finalizing things, you are missing "one" from the last sentence:

…Teela had not understood why the Sorceress insisted that she be the [ONE] to take her to the Citadel of the Elders…

Thanks! Yes, I'll admit I have not proof-read any of the story yet. I hadn't originally planned to place the text on the teaser but it seemed weird without it. I also noticed I used "it's" instead of "its" - one of my great pet peeves! LOL.

[Matthew K]

Very cool. I'm looking forward to more.

[Jon-O]

I really like it! Can't wait to see more.

[JonWes]

Thanks guys! All your comments are much appreciated.

Here's a look at page 2 (sans text)... would people like to just see everything at once or do you like the idea of me posting pages as I get them done? Hmmm...

[Heidi]

Oh wow, this is awesome!

[bamf1980]

Beautiful work.

[flaming_knob]

Do it pages by page mate. I'll have forgotten by the time it's finished and don't want to miss any of this.

Great work.

[Princess_Adora]

Great work! I agree with putting the pages up as they are done.

[danbrenus]

Oh, finally, with all the great artists lurkin' around here I asked myself when someone else would make another minicomics, and now here it is...and what good work I see!!!!
Great job Jon, the MOTUverse need new minicomics, new REAL minicomics, go on ans amaze us!

[JonWes]

Thanks so much for your replies all! danbrenus, I very much enjoyed your comics! I would love if tons of people made mini-comics. Since a couple people mentioned they'd like to see pages as they are done, I decided to do it! So it makes sense, I decided to do the cover tonight. Also, I will be updating the first post with new pages from now on. So now the cover is up along with the first two full, completed pages.

Let me know if you have any more thoughts!

[Marvelous0ne]

Very cool so far! Can't wait to see what happens next!

[danbrenus]

Thanks so much for your replies all! danbrenus, I very much enjoyed your comics! I would love if tons of people made mini-comics. Since a couple people mentioned they'd like to see pages as they are done, I decided to do it! So it makes sense, I decided to do the cover tonight. Also, I will be updating the first post with new pages from now on. So now the cover is up along with the first two full, completed pages.

Let me know if you have any more thoughts!

What thoughts you think I can have...pure greatness, you are doing great work.

[MegaGearMax]

Great job, Wes! I'm eagerly awaiting more!

[Telkan2]

This is awesome--and a story that needs to be told! I'm also really enjoying your style of drawing. I can't wait to see more (hopefully soon)!

[JonWes]

Thanks guys, you are too kind! Each page takes about 3-4 hours (so far) from start to finish. So I can do about a page a night. Now whether I'll be able to do on every night is another story...

[Jon-O]

Ooo! Coming along quite nicely!

[iron_pride]

Wow that is cool. I can't wait to see more of it.

[Mike Bock]

This is very cool Jon!!