MOTUC Mini-Comic: Teela's Destiny

**JonWes** · October 12, 2011, 10:37pm

Thanks again everyone! Page 3 is now up on page 1. I realized after I did this that I never checked to see if there was an actual Citadel of Elders in any media! I just made one up assuming there hadn't been one! So hopefully that works.

I'm going to post the next few pages in this post, since I realized that not all of the pages will fit in post 1 due to image limitations.

(IMAGES RETURNING SOON LATER IN THE THREAD)

**Jon-O** · October 12, 2011, 10:47pm

I love it! The citadel is gorgeous, as is the whole image. You're inspiring me to do my own mini comic now.

**heavy-eternium** · October 13, 2011, 12:03am

just wonderful ,thanks jonwes

I can't wait to see why the new look of teela.

Thank God for the motu-fans and their endless creativity

**2-bad** · October 13, 2011, 08:05am

That was great! Look forward to more.

**Veebs** · October 13, 2011, 09:11am

Oh, your design for the citidel is wonderful! I am really enjoying this.

**13977** · October 13, 2011, 09:25am

Great work so far Wes, I'm really enjoying it. Looking forward to see if/how you explain the hair colour change

**bskcase** · October 13, 2011, 12:49pm

I'm really digging this. I look forward to seeing in completed.

**JonWes** · October 13, 2011, 10:35pm

Thanks all! Glad you liked the citadel! It was fun to design. Technically in the bio it's not explicitly stated the citadel was made of ice... but that just seemd so much cooler... and it kind of ties in with why she's wearing a new outfit now.

No new page tonight, sadly... but hopefully I can get a couple done this weekend.

**Matthew K** · October 14, 2011, 02:37am

Originally Posted by JonWes

Thanks all! Glad you liked the citadel! It was fun to design. Technically in the bio it's not explicitly stated the citadel was made of ice... but that just seemd so much cooler... and it kind of ties in with why she's wearing a new outfit now.

No new page tonight, sadly... but hopefully I can get a couple done this weekend.

That's funny, I was just going to ask you where the design for the citadel came from because it's pretty fantastic. Digging this very much, man. Good stuff.

**Telkan2** · October 14, 2011, 12:35pm

Originally Posted by Matthew K

That's funny, I was just going to ask you where the design for the citadel came from because it's pretty fantastic. Digging this very much, man. Good stuff.

Agreed on all accounts--your depiction of the citadel is awesome!

**Jyrki** · October 15, 2011, 05:34pm

Very very nice one and well made.

**JonWes** · October 16, 2011, 12:44am

Thanks again everyone!

Page 4 is done and at the top of the page!

**Jon-O** · October 16, 2011, 01:27am

Another awesome one.

**danbrenus** · October 16, 2011, 04:30am

Brillant, just brillant!

**JonWes** · October 16, 2011, 10:56am

Thanks guys!

Although I just realized I didn't shade and highlight the gold/coppery bits on Teela's outfit! Oops! I'll have to fix that sometime today.

**JonWes** · October 16, 2011, 01:53pm

Page 5 is up!

**JonWes** · October 16, 2011, 07:18pm

And... page 6 is up at the top of page 2

**Jon-O** · October 16, 2011, 10:49pm

WOW! Page 6 is fiercely gripping! I've got music in my head and am picturing what comes next.

**Telkan2** · October 16, 2011, 11:55pm

This is awesome!!! Amazing work--I can't wait to see more!!

**JonWes** · October 17, 2011, 01:11pm

Thanks so much! I'm happy with the way page 6 turned out. It carries the emotion I wanted it to.

**Jon-O** · October 17, 2011, 02:12pm

*holds out hands* More please!!!

**JonWes** · October 17, 2011, 03:35pm

Originally Posted by Jon-O

*holds out hands* More please!!!

Okay... Page 7 is up!!!

**Jon-O** · October 17, 2011, 04:11pm

WOW!!!

**Stinkor's Gas** · October 17, 2011, 04:20pm

Someone send this to the guys at Mattel and get them to hire this guy to do mini-comics for the figures!

Superb work!

**MegaGearMax** · October 17, 2011, 09:14pm

I like how Teela's old tiara is damaged on the ground, revealing how long Teela's hair is. It's like it's symbolizing that part of her life is over.

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