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    This is incredible work!!! Thanks for sharing. I really need something like this to accent my MOTUC fixes and this hits the spot!!! I love how you use Classics stuff for it!!

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    I'm more than a little shocked at how emotional I got reading page 7! Good stuff!

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    Thanks guys! So happy you're enjoying it and it's scratching the mini-comic itch in it's own way.

    I'm also glad page 7 had some emotion to it. I was trying really hard to get it in there.

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    And here's page 8! Might be one of my personal favorites so far. I like the way the pose turned out for Teela in particular.

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    I was expecting Teela's hair to magically and instantaneously turn blond as she fought off the force bolts a few pages before, but it seems as she trains, there's a gradual change. I like it! And that pose came out great!!!
    I love an all inclusive canon!

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    Thanks Jon-O and Princess Adora!

    Well, here's Page 9! This is the last one I'll be posting until I get the rest of the book done. There are 4 pages left to go, and I feel they'll be best read as a unit instead of posted a page at a time. I don't know how much time I'll have the next few days as I'm heading out of town for the weekend, but it should be sometime next week that I can post the whole story! Looking forward to everyone being able to read the whole thing in one go.

    Once again, thanks to all for all the nice comments. I'm so happy you guys are enjoying it!

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    All 9 pages so far are fantastic!

    Great job with the story!

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    LOVE the way you explain the hair-color change! It's perfect, and makes so much sense
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    Love the explain for the change in hair colour, nice and simple
    The Matty bio's would probably have the Sorceress clone King Grayskulls hair then have MAA give Teela a hair transplant with with the cloned hair
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    Quote Originally Posted by Starshine View Post
    LOVE the way you explain the hair-color change! It's perfect, and makes so much sense
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    Yup, agreed there! So simpel and works very well!
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    Aaah, i was expecting something super sayan
    Great stuff though

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    I love your elegant and simple solution to the 'problem' of the hair color change.

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    LOL! I love it! That's a great explanation. Can't wait to see the remainder.
    I love an all inclusive canon!

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    Glad you guys liked the explanation. The more people said they were looking forward to it the more nervous I got that people would think it was too simple! But I kind of wanted something simple that kind of made sense and also provided a nice mother/daughter moment.

    I didn't like the idea of "I'm magic now and blonde hair is more magical!" because... well, that's an insult to all we non-blondes out there, I think.

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    Awesome job! Beautiful art work, and I LOVE the story!!!

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    Fantastic work, sir! Loving this!

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    I love how you explained the hair color Jon. Very creative man. Great job!!
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    Thanks all as always!


    Little update:
    I got one page done before I left... and hope to get one done tonight now that I'm back or a couple done tomorrow. I'm mulling over whether to add two more pages or not... not sure I need them though... we'll see.

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    Do you plan on doing other characters after this is complete? I would love to see your take on any of them!!!

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    Thanks! It's been a lot of fun. Well, I REALLY want to do Battleground Evil-Lynn's mini-comic because it'd essentially be a sequel to this one. But I'm not sure if I can do it right away. I am supposed to be finishing my first novel. LOL. I've just got a tiny bit more to go on that, so I should focus on that next. But then I'd really like to do the E-L mini-comic. After that? Not sure.

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    Really great story here, I very much enjoyed reading it. I also really like the reasoning you have given for the change in Teela's hair color, it was quite brilliant actually.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eterniandreams View Post
    Aaah, i was expecting something super sayan
    I'm really glad for the explanation you gave for the color-change on her hair. Never liked the "sayan" effect.

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    Thanks again all! I'm chomping at the bit to show you guys the rest of it! I only have one more page to go and it's all finished!

    I decided to go ahead and put in the two pages I was going back and forth on. And it was the right choice. But man oh man those two pages were killer! I think you'll recognize them when you see the final product! So I'm hoping to have the final thing done and ready to view by Friday at the latest.

    Thanks once again for everyone's continued support and interest!

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