How did I not know about this awesome show? I think it's cool that your friends are so willing to play around with the She-Ra concepts, and on camera no less! Very neat group of folks. And the costumes are lookin' very good too! Count me in.
...but WHO is the red-faced purple/blue dude in the Rebellion?? A new character, hmm?
Leech's costume is great, Grizz is hilarious and I get a big kick out of seeing Shadow Weaver and Catra and Hordak up on the screen (smart costume for Hordak, by the way).
LOL - I just watched the footage you spliced together. A few thoughts, if you'd like to hear 'em...
A) Your friends are awesome
B) Castaspella as a guy is so LOL worthy, I love it.
C) You could go one of two ways with this thing - either emphasize the low-budget, amateur approach for laughs, or try to cut it as tight as you can.
For example: the shot where She-Ra and Bow are running down a hallway towards Catra and Griz...right now you can tell they're preparing to run down the hall because there is a pause before they actually do. If you want it to have momentum, cut it so they're already in mid-run. If you want it to be funny, go ahead and let them stand there for a second and then run
It really depends on how you want us, the viewers, to react. This is going to have a lot of potential for comedy, so choose where you want there the funny to shine.
I don't say any of this as an insult, though - I'm seriously impressed with the costumes, the character variety, everything!