I absolutely loved this chapter!
I have one nit pick and that was the part where Sybilline reveals herself to He-Man. I felt that was to soon for that character & there are just to many characters to keep track of that most readers might get lost. I feel to many new characters happening all at once feels forced. Other than that terrific story.
Love where the story is going. Its a nice break from the snake men from the last MYP show (ep.14 needed something before it ). Going forward it needed another story involving Skeletor as a major player again.
I imagine in the time the Snake men were running a muck Skeletor was putting his plans together. So, this works perfectly. Its good to see now Skeletor as a very powerful & cunning threat.
I felt this was an episode long awaited by fans, seeing Shokoti in a new 200x story. You really done it justice. Very epic!
I loved that it played similar to the old Filmation cartoon with Trap-Jaw working with Masque & Melaktha with He-Man. I liked how you fit Extendar, Scare Glow and Illumina. Very nice. I look forward to another exciting chapter of the story.
p.s. I love that you are telling about time traveling Keldor & giving a little more history on Preternia. I found a lot of that confusing.