Wow, that was pretty cool! As for the topic; I dunno...doesn't say she died. She just got a little stabbed. That's not always fatal in the comic world!
Anyway: brilliant take on the subject! I LOVE that she has a helmet! It takes care of the whole world knowing that she was once a Force Captain. However...I think I'll still have the Rebellion know, in my own story. I think it creates an interesting matter of trust among them to know they have a former Force Captain with them but not fully know why she defected. Better that the common folk in Etheria not know who she was, though.
But yeah, MORE fuel for the story fires kindling in my brain!