That's pretty funny. I think it might work better with more panels though, my eye jumped to Gwildor before I was done with the first panel, so the punchline was a little spoiled.
Another comic strip just for fun, and since the hobbit movie is out, it might be a good time to post it.
Yes, that is because the first panel is too dark.
Out of the night that covers me,
Black as the pit from pole to pole,
I thank whatever gods may be
For my unconquerable soul.
It matters not how strait the gate,
How charged with punishments the scroll,
I am the master of my fate,
I am the captain of my soul.