I really like the story and how it brings all the different story elements together.
The sketch makes sense but itīs a bit to rough for me. His face has that almost evil "iīll get you anyway" look to it. And i know unshaven makes more sense but He-man to me is that miraclesly clean shaven warrior no matter what happens
And pants on He-Man DC proved they are not the look for him, he needs bare legs for me.
Aside from personal nit pickings on my part, i like what you have shown so far.