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    Heroic Warrior Granamir's Avatar
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    The magic amulet

    Hello everyone, I post in this thread my new Motu comic called The magic amulet.
    I hope you like it!
    First five pages...
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    Absolutely gorgeous, dude!!! I'd love to see more.
    JITSU!!!! Thank the Elder Gods!!!!

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    Awesome stuff!

    One thing, on page 2 there are these white borders round skeletors face, not in the other pages, i would suggest get rid of them

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    Last edited by Granamir; September 11, 2013 at 01:01pm.

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    Great looking art man. My only gripe would be the lettering. IMO the font used isn't very readable and you might want someone to check the grammar and sentence structures.
    Take a look at my deviantart. http://kaassouffle.deviantart.com/gallery/

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neo View Post
    Great looking art man. My only gripe would be the lettering. IMO the font used isn't very readable and you might want someone to check the grammar and sentence structures.
    You're right! Unfortunately, not being English I have a bit of trouble making a perfect translation! if someone wants to supervise the dialogues and grammar, and the font, thank you!
    I posted all the pages on my deviant art, here's the link:
    http://granamir30.deviantart.com/gallery/44662166
    Last edited by Granamir; September 8, 2013 at 07:32am.

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    Your super cartoony style mixed with little details and great face expressions is amazing.

    But my favorite panel is the Eternos palace, donīt ask me why i simply love it
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    Thanks very much Niki!

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    Just for the opportunity to compliment again your work... Much respect, it's truly brilliant.

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    Mini-comic Garn!
    http://old.he-man.org/primary_sects/...50/07-08.shtml
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    Thank you very much, the reference to mini comics is surely obvious, but also to comic books released in the 80's in other publishers.

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    What fun! Many thanks for sharing your excellent work! I love the clarity of your artwork and the luminous colouring you employ and I think it's a really interesting and arresting style.

    The only drawback is that, in places your English slips (in one panel back to Italian....) and isn't easy to understand. If you ever want it checked over, then do feel free to ask and I will see if I can help. And I'm sure that there are other members here who would be happy to do the same for you.

    And - just great to see He-Man and Skeletor actually looking like - well - He-Man and Skeletor. Let's hope that this unusual trend catches on....

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    Thanks to my friend Jon "Scriptor" the dialogs of the comic, now are correct.










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    And finally the cover.


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    looks great, I would much prefer the official comic to look like this as it is a LOT more MOTU to me. Sure it looks more Filmation based (which is not my fave version of the line) but it is a HUGE improvement over what DC has gave us.

    I would say my only real complaint (and it is not really much of one) is the transformation panel. It doesn't look like Adam is becoming He-Man. Instead it looks like Adam and He-Man are standing next to each other.
    Take a look at my attempts at coloring

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    Thanks very much wolfsfang for beautiful kind!
    For the page with the transformation, I was inspired to this page taken from a mini-comic of the '80s.


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