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    The Breaking


    Hi,
    I wanted to show a kind of fan fiction about the classic motu series.
    I am not good at storytelling, and my english could sound bad but I hope you will enjoy my little works.



    Corridite is a rare and unstable crystal with great power, such power could be used for protection or Destruction. There is only one place in Eternia where Corridite can be found : the Crystal mine at the Widgets Fort.
    After a long day spent in the mine, the Widgets Sleep. However, dark forces lie awake and swear Widgets demise.


    All Widgets are Sleeping except for the little Squinch. Watching for intruders is his duty.


    "_Hey, what was that!?"
    Squinch heard a strange noise and notices figures moving in the shadow as he looks at the front of the fort.


    Squinch gets instantly captured by a sticky rope, leaving him paralysed.
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    There is only one who can throw web so fast, the master of escape : Webstor!


    Even if Squinch is down, the great gate is still closed.


    But how long?


    Enters the untouchable Spikor!


    That gate was not so great...
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    "_I can't let them take the fort like this!"


    Squinch is trying to activate the He-Man signal launcher.
    "_I must warn He-Man!"


    "_No, you won't, not this time!"


    "_NOOooo..."
    Squinch is knocked out by the awful gas.


    The same fate that awaits all the Widgets.
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    The evil warrior makes his way to the crystal mine.


    Nobody can stand the master of stench, Stinkor!


    "_The master will be proud of Stinkor!!!"
    To be continued...
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    tremendous work!!!!!!! I totally love it!!!!!!!!!
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    Awesome!

    That's fantastic, Innershade! I really dig it!

    More, I say! More!


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    Fantastic job! Can't wait to see more!

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    VERY creative, very classic-Filmationy,and I LOVE your character designs, still in the spirit of Filmation, and yet beautifully detailed, great work all around!!!

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    WOW! That was like watching a brand new "classic" episode, I loved it!
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    Innershade, you're AWESOME!!! i definitly looks like actual scenes from a lost MOTU Episode. Great work & lookin forward to more.

    Just asking, are the backgrounds done by you as well or the characters only. Irrespective of that, Its really Fantastic.
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    This is truly awesome. Outstanding work, Innershade! It really is like a new Filmation episode... in this case, Stinkor's first appearance in the MotU Filmation cartoon!

    You capture Filmation but with an added nice shading affect that gives it a more modern feeling.

    Wow... just looking at this makes me wonder if it would be possible for us fans to make our own Filmation episodes!
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    Is that a real episode?!?!?

    Because it should be!


    AWESOME work!
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    Haha pretty cool dude! Nice intergration of the pics and bgs.
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    Thx, I was a bit lazy because I used backgrounds plus some Squinch frames from snapshots, and edited them.
    I also re-used my own old Stinkor and Webstor, shown previously on the board.
    Ok then, let's work on the second part...
    By the way I was wondering if someone could correct my lines...or add better lines.
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    This is fantastic Innershade!! Wow you made a terrific job.

    Stinkor looks damn cool bro, damn cool.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Innershade View Post
    Ok then, let's work on the second part...
    By the way I was wondering if someone could correct my lines...or add better lines.
    Correct your lines? I think they are nothing short of PERFECT!! I really can't wait for the next installment to this story.
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    Well done, lad!

    Now back to work, you! ^^

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    Good gravy!! What have I stumbled upon here?!

    Innershade, your artwork is FLAWLESS! You really know your Filmation characters well too! But I think what shines out the most of all (apart from that fantastic shot of Webstor) is how well you've captured the scenery; Your background scenes look just like the magical Eternia we all know and love from the classic series!

    Magnifique!!

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    wow. you did that very well.

    i like it. and i am waiting for the next part

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    Quote Originally Posted by Innershade View Post
    Thx, I was a bit lazy because I used backgrounds plus some Squinch frames from snapshots, and edited them.
    I also re-used my own old Stinkor and Webstor, shown previously on the board.
    Ok then, let's work on the second part...
    By the way I was wondering if someone could correct my lines...or add better lines.
    Your lines are excellent... perfect since you have pictures to accompany them. They add a nice punch to the pictures, saying just the right amount, and in the right style.
    "I'm not just crying for Hordak. I'm crying for the saddest thing I know - a wasted life. To be given that most precious gift - the gift of living, to do with as we choose. I'm crying, because this man has chosen to throw it away, and when he goes, nobody will care..." - She-Ra ( "My Friend, My Enemy")

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    Hey now, that's pretty impressive.
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    I have to post here again, i just love that stinkor. the details and colors are amazing.

    How about Faker!!?? Any plans?

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    Well...Faker will show up...but not yet.
    The next part will show a villain who did not make it in the classic cartoon.
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    Really, really good stuff Innershade.

    Like someone said, it feels like I'm looking at stills from a lost episode from the original series. I love it!

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    It's amazing how many creative boardmembers we have around here. This is very nicely done, can't wait to see more.

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