Deus Ex Machina!

My first pure NA fanfic! Yay!

On Primus, He-Man and the Galactic Guardians encounter a massive vessel currently seated in orbit. Who is within it? What do they want with Primus?

The beginning of a "New Adventures" epic!

Deus Ex Machina

Chapter One: "We Come in Peace"

~W~

Good start.

I can't remember the New Adventures clearly, but as far as I remember you've caught the atomospere of the show well.

Look forward to reading more, it feels very much like the cartoon

Hit quite a streak today. Brand-new stuff for ya.

Chapter Two . . . who are the Patheon? What do they want with Primus?

"The Patheon"

Answers . . . and more questions!

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Wacky Martin: Prasie from Ceaser! It has the cartoon feel now, but it'll grow up quite a bit in the next few chapters.


~W~

New chapter, folks.

As the Patheon takes their place on Primus, He-Man and Mara grow closer! Plus: unexpected trouble for Flipshot.

"Initiation"

~W~

I like the darker tone it seems to be taking, although I cant help but feel werban deserved that

Are Skeletor and the Mutants gonna play much of a role down the line? :0

Originally Posted by Wacky Martin

I like the darker tone it seems to be taking, although I cant help but feel werban deserved that

Glad you're liking the tone. It's gets more mature with this chapter. Werban . . . something about that guy makes him such a joy to write. Jerks make for great characters.

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New chapter!

The Galactic Guardians seek out the true nature of the Patheon! Who is the true master of their task force? What dark secret lies in the Carrier? Plus: Flipshot's a chick! And He-Man and Mara's whirlwind relationship continues!

"Face To Face"

~W~

Great work.

I like the way you showed the relationship between He-Man and Mara.

He-Man and the gang return to Primus, and must now deal with the consequences of their actions.

"On the Run"

~W~

I've only just started reading this story and am already hooked.

Thanks Brimstone!

I'll be getting it up-dated in the next couple of days.

~W~

New chapter. Short, but sweet.

Skeletor and Flogg make their next move. Flipshot comes clean with his new form. Mara and He-Man figure what they're doing with themselves.

"Down Time"

It's short, but it gets the story moving.

~W~

good chapter.

You're right: it definitely gets the story moving.

I wonder what will happen to flipshot next time

Originally Posted by ZeroCool

I wonder what will happen to flipshot next time

Just wait and see.

By the way, here's Flipshot's current form, curtesy of my fiancee . . .



Next chapter should be up sometime next week.

~W~

Glad to read more, liked the Skeletor/Flogg scene, cool picture

The final chapter has been posted!

The Galactic Guardians take on the Patheon and the Mutants!

Expect the unexpected!

"At the Steps of the Council Chamber"

~W~

A good conclusion, I enjoyed reading this, and am eager for the next part now

Liked the Sebrian and Skeletor battle, and the fact Crita saved Skeletor. Flogg was cool here too, though I think he seems a bit too clever.

Originally Posted by Wacky Martin

Flogg was cool here too, though I think he seems a bit too clever.

I wanted him to see a little more compotent in this story than he was on the show. Sometimes I felt like the writers were short-changing Flogg. I mean, the guy did raise a space fleet and an army against Primus. Gotta be at least somewhat smart to do that.

I figure there are various layers to Flogg, too. We'll be seeing some different sides to him as time goes on.

~W~

why is flpishot a woman?

Originally Posted by Ginuwine

why is flpishot a woman?

Wow! Surprise necro-thread!

Flipshot was transformed into a woman because he kept hitting on a female Mutant who had the power to alter her own and others DNA. It was a form of revenge. He gets turned back in the next story.

~W~

You must write something about the fate of the Bitter Rose Goddess amidst the onslaught of all this technology! It is a rambling epic of what happens when the onslaught of the futuristic technology in NA destroys Eternia's humanity and innocence,..and only the power of the Bitter Rose can save all from the evil that emerges to conquer this soulless world! It is a dark tale you were fated to write, many, many eons ago. See the Teelana smiley? That's her talkin, so you must obey...

And I loved Deus Ex Machina. Superb.