Sybilline re-design; pencils

Hey all, this is the Sybilline redesign I finally did that was meant for Predabot's redesign challenge of Zilora and Sybilline. I am posting it here in order to negate any change in the voting. This is just the pencils and a concept for her staff, which I am not 100% on board with. Let me know what you think.

Love what you did with the cobra wand!

Nice work!

I like it, though the chin looks a bit too masculine to me. The design of the headdress looks really interesting, as well as the sharp oval shapes you've used in different parts of her costume. I'm not sure if that was your intention, but they remind me of feathers, especially in the boots.

I hope you can find the time and energy to finish this some day. I'd love to see your Sibylline in full color.

Originally Posted by Mechthild

I like it, though the chin looks a bit too masculine to me. The design of the headdress looks really interesting, as well as the sharp oval shapes you've used in different parts of her costume. I'm not sure if that was your intention, but they remind me of feathers, especially in the boots.

I hope you can find the time and energy to finish this some day. I'd love to see your Sibylline in full color.

I agree the chin is very masculine. I will probably change that. The ovals are meant to be metal pieces almost like shards or something. Feathers seem to be little to "good" and I wanted to convey that she looks like she is evil but looks can be deceiving. Thanks for letting me know you opinion and critiques, I really do appreciate it.